Dargquon Ql'deleodna

Ok, this is quite an odd intro to a story. Firstly it is greatly lacking description, describing the place, time, and weather can add some extra emphasis on emotion and ...

She stands in the field, Her charcoal spheres pointed to the sky. She stands hoping for just one drop to fall. I figured the charcoal spheres meant that she had ...

I prowl the night Waiting. I am not cruelty; I am not greed. I am just death. I do not take What is not mine. I do not cause hurt ...

um... wow, i hope this is just a joke. If not im gonna say this, scrap the writing. Just leave it with the title for us to let our own ...

Raw and beautiful I take in a breath of ripe air and slowly release it out through my mouth. firstly this stanza is quite pointless and can be cut from ...

Nice job. Although I cant exactly tell what this is about or where its going (leaves me to think, I have a thought but due to the area of the ...

This is stunning work, very descriptive and powerful. this is a very very good story, sad, but it has a very strong,obvious, and important meaning to it. And that is ...

Don't read this book, although it is interesting how george orwell connected the important people of the russian revolution to animals, it is over all a terrible book. We were ...

this is cool, lots of potential as everyone said, and marines rock. This reminds me very much so of a game called starcraft. Cool game, but old. Yea, very cool, ...

wow, this is awsome, GO MARINES!!! and griffinkeeper too.. Nice story Grif, i like the plot, nice pace, very cool, i think you should possibly try to use more yws ...

hahahhaha lol, what a poem, i have actually never bought anybody anything nor have i ever given a present to anyone on valentines day..... i always loose all of my ...

Chapter 1 What if I told you that I didn't love you anymore? asked the girl questioningly, while a genuine curiosity in her delicate but firey (FIERY) brown eyes. That ...

sweet story silent aviator, stupid drill instructor disgraced the camo, how dare he, suggesiton for Petrusnek when in live fire situations "freindly" fire may occur :twisted:. i want the DI ...

coool 8) !, thats a really cool story, good job, very very nice. i didnt knotice any mistakes, except i noticed that the font was large.... any reason for that? ...

i feel really sorry for you, i havent experienced anything like that , except one time my sisters freind who was also a friend of mine, was killed in an ...